Dream Job ( FIRST DRAFT )

              
        The most enjoyable thing to any person is to have a dream job. Everyone in our society have a dream job which he wants to have after graduation. For example my dream job is to be a teacher so i entered the faculty of education .


               Teacher's job is a very important job in our society because a teacher is reasonable for building the new generation.

         On the one hand,there are a lot of advantages of teacher's job such as , rising salaries , the growing pride in profession ,the joy of working with children and caring colleges and the intellectual stimulation that are so often a part of class room life  as well as  the opportunity to affect the lives of the nation's youth . 
         
           One the other hand , there are some disadvantages of this job such as ; lack of professional respect from others ,get bogged down by routine , have inadequate time for contact with other adults and face frustration when idealistic goals collide with student apathy , parent hostility , and the demands of old fashioned tape . 

           Finally , the teacher 's job is an ethic job which help children achieve a well rounded education and give encouragement to a child that might not get in at home .

dream job

     Introduction

   -MY DREAM JOB IS TO BE A TEACHER.

      BODY

-PARAGRAPH 1

   -REASONS FOR BEING A TEACHER.

-PARAGRAPH 2

   -ADVANTAGES OF BEING A TEACHER 

-PARAGRAPH 3

   -SOME OBSTACLES WHICH FACE TEACHERS DURING THEIR JOB 

      CONCLUSION  

.Education system (final draft)

           -Education system is the infra-structure of any country in the world.Some countries have a very good education system and other countries their education system is not successful enough.Egypt is one of these countries in which people do not achieve any progress becouse of lack of education.
           -In Egypt ,we can find many problems in education system facing students .Firstly,low literacy rates and exploding population .this exploding reached to the increasing numbers of graduates and over crowded schools and classrooms .Secondly , educatin quality ,particularly in basic education and technical and vocational education , had seriously declined becouse of learning conducted with material drills and physical punishment . Thirdly, lack of technology , poor and absent libraries and laboratories. 
           -There are some suggested solutions to solve these problems.The first solution is that the government should build new schools to obtain the huge numbers of graduates which resulted from over population .The second is the ministery of education should prevent teachers from using physical punishment with students.The third is the ministery should also provide schools with all means of technology especially computers and with modern laboratories and modern tools.
           -Finally, education system is very important to all people in Egypt.Our country can not reach  the European countries and it can not make any progress without a successful education system.

Education system (first draft)

       -Education system is the infra-structure of any country in the world.Some countries have a very good education system and other countries their education system is not successful enough.Egypt is one of these countries in which people do not achieve any progress becouse of lack of education.
           -In Egypt ,we can find many problems in education system which face learners .Firstly,low literacy rates and exploding population which reached to the increasing numbers of graduates and over crowded schools and classrooms .Secondly , educatin quality ,particularly in basic education and technical and vocational education , had seriously declined becouse of learning conducted with material drills and physical punishment . Thirdly, lack of technology and poor or absent libraries and laboratories. 
           -There are some suggested solutions to solve these problems.The first solution is the government should build new schools to obtain the huge numbers of graduates which resulted from over population .The second is the ministery of education should prevent teachers from using physical punishment with students.The third is the ministery should also provide schools with all means of technology especially computers and with modern laboratories and modern tools.
           -Finally, education system is very important to all people in Egypt.Our country can not reach  the European countries and it can not make any progress without a successful education system.

Education system

   -Introducation
-The meaning of education system.
-Education system in our country is not successful enough.
     -Body
      -paragraph 1
-Problems of education system in our country.
       -paragraph 2
-Some suggessted solutions of these problems.
     -Conclusion

final draft (woman work)

       We have some argumentative concepts in our society .one of the main argumentative topics is (women work).In Egypt we can find some people with and others are aganist it.In my opinion woman work is very important for Egyptian woman.

       Woman has the right to work since the appearance of Islam in Egypt.the Islamic religion was respecting woman and giving her the right to work to help her husband . Now also in the country side we find some women work in the fields with their husbands.

          I think woman should work to prove herself in the Egyptian society, to make use of her education and also to gain money.

           Above,there are some people who aganist woman work.they think that the place where woman should work in is her home and the main task for woman is to be a housewife.they think women can not bear the difficulties of work like men.If they work,they will have little time for their own families ,and worried about sick children ,house work,and child care.

           Finally there are two opinions of woman work.But, I think women should work to gain opportunities to learn new skills, improve their self-confidence, earn income, and gain respect in their communities.

woman work (first draft)

       We have some argumentative concepts in our society .one of the main argumentative topics is (woman work).In Egypt we can find some people are with and other aganist it.In my opinion woman work is very important for Egyption woman.
       Woman has the right to work since the appearance of islam in Egypt.the islamic religion was respecting woman and giving her the right to work to help her husband . Now also in the country side we find some women work in the fields with their husbands.
          I think woman should work to prove herself in the Egyption society, to make use of her education and also to gain money.
           As we mentioned,they are some people who aganist woman work.they think that the place where woman should work in is her home and the main task for woman is to be a housewife.they think women can not bear the difficulties of work like men.If they work,they will have little time to care for their own families ,and worried about sick children ,house work,and child care.
           Finally there are two opinions of woman work.But, I think women should work to gain opportunities to learn new skills, improve their self-confidence, earn income, and gain respect in their communities.

woman work ( outline )

    introduction
-woman work is an argumentative concept
-some people with and other against it
-my opinion is that woman work is very important

  body

paragraph  1
-the causes of woman work

paragraph  2
-the evidence of my opinion
-examples

conclusion
-the counter opinion
-the causes of thier opinion

final draft "pollution"

One of the most dangerous problems in our society is pollution . People in Egypt face different types of pollution like(:) water pollution , noise pollution(etc…) . In my opinion, the most dangerous type in Egypt is water pollution. 
         Water pollution (Nile pollution) is caused by throwing rubbish of people and factories in the Nile also the poisons of factories ,sewage and  ; domestic house holds,industrial and agricultural practicesproduce waste water that can cause pollution of many lakes and rivers . Sewage is the term used for waste water that often contains Urine and laundry waste .
         Water pollution affects our life badly. the most dangerous diseases came from water pollution also the death of water creatures.
           There must be solutions for this problem . in my opinion , the country should ban people from throwing rubbish and waste materials in the water .It also should construct factories away from water resources  and raise the awareness of people about the importance of water in our life .Water pollution is a big problem and we should do our best to decrease is this problem.

pollution final draft

             One of the most dangerous problems in our society is pollution . People in Egypt can face different types of pollution like water pollution , noise pollution,car exhaustand so on.The most dangerous type in Egypt is water pollution. 
         Water pollution (Nile pollution) is caused by throwing rubbish of people and factories in the Nile also the poisons of factories ,sewage and waste water ; domestic households,industrial and agricultural practices produce waste water that can cause pollution of many lakes and rivers.Sewage is the term used for waste water that often contains Urine and laundry waste.
         Water pollution affects our life badly ,for example the most dangerous diseases came from water pollution also the death of water creatures.
           There must be solutions for this problem, in my opinion the country should ban people from throwing rubbish and waste materials in the water  ,it also construct factories away from water resourses and raise the awareness of people about the importance of water in our life .Water pollution is abig problem and we should do our best to decrease the amount of this problem.       

pollution draft

        - One of the most dangerous problems in our country is pollution . People in Egypt can face different kinds of pollution like water pollution ,air pollution , noise pollution and so on .
The most dangerous kind of them in Egypt is water pollution .

          - Water pollution (the Nile pollution) is caused by throwing rubbish of people and factories in the Nile , also the poisons of factories are another important cause of water pollution .
        
              -Water  pollution effects our life badly , for example the most dangerous diseases came from water pollution and also the death of water creatures . 

              - There must be solutions for this problem to keep our environment clean . In my opinion the country should prohibt people from throwing rubbish or factories materials in the Nile , and it also should construct factories away from water resources and raise the awareness of people about the importance of water in our life .     

pollution / outline

First paragraph
-Kinds of pollution in egypt
-Water pollution is the most dangerous kind in egypt
Second paragraph
-Causes of water pollution 
- Throwing rubbish in the water 
- The poisons of factories
Third paragraph
-Effects of water pollution
-The most dangerous diseases came from the water pollution 
-The death of water creatures 
Forth paragraph 
- Solutions for this kind of pollution 
- The country should ban people from throwing rubbish water 
-It also should construct factories away from water sources

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