We have some argumentative concepts in our society .one of the main argumentative topics is (woman work).In Egypt we can find some people are with and other aganist it.In my opinion woman work is very important for Egyption woman.
Woman has the right to work since the appearance of islam in Egypt.the islamic religion was respecting woman and giving her the right to work to help her husband . Now also in the country side we find some women work in the fields with their husbands.
I think woman should work to prove herself in the Egyption society, to make use of her education and also to gain money.
As we mentioned,they are some people who aganist woman work.they think that the place where woman should work in is her home and the main task for woman is to be a housewife.they think women can not bear the difficulties of work like men.If they work,they will have little time to care for their own families ,and worried about sick children ,house work,and child care.
Finally there are two opinions of woman work.But, I think women should work to gain opportunities to learn new skills, improve their self-confidence, earn income, and gain respect in their communities.
Woman has the right to work since the appearance of islam in Egypt.the islamic religion was respecting woman and giving her the right to work to help her husband . Now also in the country side we find some women work in the fields with their husbands.
I think woman should work to prove herself in the Egyption society, to make use of her education and also to gain money.
As we mentioned,they are some people who aganist woman work.they think that the place where woman should work in is her home and the main task for woman is to be a housewife.they think women can not bear the difficulties of work like men.If they work,they will have little time to care for their own families ,and worried about sick children ,house work,and child care.
Finally there are two opinions of woman work.But, I think women should work to gain opportunities to learn new skills, improve their self-confidence, earn income, and gain respect in their communities.
Your draft is good but you need to oranize it better and add more background information to your essay.
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1. main argumentative topics is (woman('s) work).In Egypt we can find some people are with and other(s are) aganist it.In my opinion woman work is
2. very important for Egyption(wrong spelling) woman.
Woman has the right to work since the appearance of islam(capitalize) in
3. prove herself in the Egyption(wrong spelling) society, to make use of her
4. (above),(theyare) some people (who )are aganist woman work.they think that the place where woman should work in is her home and the
5. they work,they will have little time (for) (to care for) their own families ,and (worried about) sick children ,house work,and child care.
Good work HOBA,your introduction is attractive and the the counter opinion is clear,but you have some spelling mistakes .But the work as a whole is nice. God blesses you.
ردحذفhi hoba,your choice is very good ,your ideas are clear, your introduction is good you follows the system of argumentative essay you essay has main idea your opinion is clear
ردحذفgood essay Hoba .it is interesting and your topic is nice .your opinion is clear
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